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Date: 10/18/1999 9:41:00 PM
From Authorid: 653
HEY KAMMYY, KEEP WRITING YOU GOT ME ALL INTERESTED IN YOUR STORY. SO FAR ITS GREAT,THOUGH, I HAVE A LITTLE TROUBLE BELIEVING THAT YOU ARE FOURTEEN. YOU SEEM OLDER. ANYWAY, GET TO IT. PHALYNX..... |
| Date: 10/19/1999 12:25:00 AM so far it sucks, get to the point! No one cars what the wallpaper looks like! |
| Date: 10/19/1999 6:19:00 AM From Authorid: 1036 Keep writing, but I agree--either you are a straight A 14 year old, or you are older than 14. I have not seen many 14 year olds that are able to write this well?????? |
| Date: 10/19/1999 7:40:00 AM From Authorid: 806 If you are 14 you have exceptional writing talent and vocabulary, not to mention spelling skills for your age. As for the second comment ~ details are what makes a writer. This is a very interesting story and I can't wait to read the next part of it. |
Date: 10/19/1999 8:14:00 AM
From Authorid: 277
I really can't believe you are 14 years old. son I think this didn't happen in 1998 is because of the New Kids on the Block posters in Nikki's room. They were from the late 80's and early 90's. Also, it is written very well. Anyways, it sounds good so far......Hawk ![]() |
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Date: 10/19/1999 8:24:00 AM
replie #2 obviously you dont know what your talking about details are what makes up a good story so maybe you should shut the h*ll up ggreat story so far ...jedgecomb |
| Date: 10/19/1999 9:49:00 AM From Authorid: 408 Good story. You write very well. As I was reading your story, I could visualize everything, and I think that is very important in writing. -K. |
Date: 10/19/1999 9:53:00 AM
From Authorid: 277
Jedgecomb, You are trying very hard to be "da man" (or "da woman") with your idea of witty comments throughout this site. Keep your day job......Hawk ![]() |
Date: 10/19/1999 10:39:00 AM
From Authorid: 277
I wrote reply #5. Instead of saying "son", it should say "So".......Hawk ![]() |
| Date: 10/19/1999 1:55:00 PM ( From Author ) From Authorid: 1091 I thank all you very much for your comments (with exception of #2) You have encouraged me to keep writing on to part 2. Yes, I'm truly 14. Why do you guys find it so hard to except that a teen could write so well? Well, to tell you the truth there are some of us out here who read and write alot on any spare time we might have. I love to read for fun. Great,big novels not those juvenile books that you think I might read. I also love to write. I've been writing stories and poems since I was seven. When you've been writing so long you are bound to get good at it someday. Right? Oh,and Hawk I didn't say New Kids on the Block. I said Backstreet Boys,N'Sync,Jordan Knight,and Joey McIntyre. Where did you get New Kids on the Block from? Kammy :) |
Date: 10/19/1999 6:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 870
Keep it coming kid and dont wory about I have also been reading and writing stories and poetry for a long time and the details are what make it work...Static ![]() |
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Date: 10/20/1999 1:20:00 AM
From Authorid: 653
HEY KAMMY! I COULDNT HELP BUT NOTICE THAT YOU HAVE OBTAINED QUITE THE FOLLOWING HERE. I DEFINATELY THINK THAT YOU SHOULD CONTINUE WITH YOUR STORY AND INCLUDE EVEN MORE DETAIL THIS TIME. I DONT CARE IF YOUR EIGHT OR EIGHTY YOU WRITE GREAT! AS FOR THOSE LUDE COMMENTS REGARDING YOU AND SEX DONT READ MUCH INTO IT. PEOPLE LIKE THAT USUALLY GET SHOT BY PEOPLE LIKE ME. YOU KNOW, HEAVILY ARMED NICE GUYS.PHALYNX..... |
| Date: 10/20/1999 6:14:00 AM From Authorid: 1205 Who cares about your friends house and how much money they have. Get to the ouija part! |
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Date: 10/20/1999 9:52:00 AM
From Authorid: 629
GREAT STORY, KEEP ON WRITTING THE NEXT PART.. I THINK THIS STORY IS GOOD.... |
Date: 10/20/1999 11:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 1055
DO NOT GET INVOLVED WITH OUIJI BOARDS! ![]() |
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Date: 10/20/1999 12:51:00 PM
Kammy, keep up the good work!! A comment for Hawk, you owe this girl an apology too. You love to make comments to other teens about their spelling or grammar, yet we have one here who can write well and you say you don't believe she is as old as she says. I feel that I write fairly well, but I'm not going to judge or critisize someone who can't. I would hate to be your little boy, if your as critical of him as you are of some of these kids (teens). |
| Date: 10/21/1999 2:55:00 PM Laern how to use proper sentences! |
| Date: 10/21/1999 11:06:00 PM From Authorid: 1281 Keep going! When I was your age I loved to read and write--especially scary/mystery stuff. It's sad that more 14 yr. olds don't read and write as well you do. I want to find out what happens! |
| Date: 10/22/1999 11:31:00 AM Way too much unecessary detail....BLAH! it put me to sleep. |
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Date: 10/22/1999 5:06:00 PM
Man you are a good writer! You should publish this story! You would sell a few million copys. Can't wait to read the rest!Late |
| Date: 10/22/1999 5:51:00 PM To the author: "Jordan Knight" and "Joey McIntyre" were both in "New Kids On The Block". Feel silly now????????? |
Date: 11/4/1999 9:55:00 PM
From Authorid: 1631
Good Grief! Those former New Kids (the author would have been about 4 or 5 when they were a group) are solo "artists" now and are popular with the kids who are around this girl's age. She's young, give her a break! You're doing great, Kammy. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to hear the outcome...Ali ![]() |
| Date: 11/6/1999 12:57:00 PM From Authorid: 1580 Kammy, Nikki sounds so much like me! I have an Ouija too. Oh My Gosh, and My dream house is a Victorian House it has always been my dream home, Nikki is sooo Lucky. Oh By the way I am 14 too. Where do you guys Live? I live In Cali. -Gemini BTW Your story is cool so far! |
Date: 1/30/2000 12:23:00 AM
From Authorid: 3836
i think it has just a little too much detail but that doesn't really bother me. I love to write so much that i copied out everysingle word in my school assinment book. it took me 4ever! keep writing! ![]() |
| Date: 2/10/2000 1:10:00 PM good story finfish it |
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Date: 3/11/2000 1:34:00 PM
A BRILLIANT STORY SO FAR! I CAN'T WAIT TILL I READ THE NEXT PART!!!! JULIE,SCOTLAND |
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Date: 4/9/2000 7:27:00 PM
I'm loving your story. I agree. The detail is important. I can visulise everything you are saying. So what if your friend has pictures of New Kids on the Block. I'm 13 nearly 14 and I like the Beatles and i have posters of them (not much though.) I guess I am like your friend Nikki as I made an ouija board and are really interested in that stuff. Keep on writing. Can't wait to hear what happens next. Sarah |
Date: 4/21/2000 6:34:00 PM
From Authorid: 7574
you are a great writer. i love all the details. who says children can't write? my friend mindy #3909 is 12 and her stories and poems have so much depth to them, sometimes adults don't even understand them. -amy- ![]() |
Date: 5/12/2000 8:10:00 PM
From Authorid: 870
Yeah Kammy tell us more we need to know!!!.....Static ![]() |
Date: 6/30/2000 8:50:00 AM
From Authorid: 6949
WRIGHT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~kittenbaby~ ![]() |
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Date: 10/17/2000 12:29:00 PM
too much side track, almost quit reading it. diane |
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Date: 10/17/2000 1:32:00 PM
This story is so cool! Please finnish it soon, i want to hear the ending! |
| Date: 12/13/2000 11:22:00 AM Keep going babe, This stories well imteresting!But stop saying "Anyway, back to the story."It gets a bit boring.Oh, and Kammy's a well cool name!!!!! |
| Date: 10/5/2001 11:05:00 AM From Authorid: 43908 It was okay but too many small details that could have been left out.When you want people to be interested in your story,make them wonder what will happen next.And keep tring you have a really good start. okay --------Chunkey Butt |
Date: 10/30/2001 2:54:00 PM
From Authorid: 43653
Hey Kammy! I believe you are 14. I started writing when I was about 8 or 9, and everyone thought my writing technique was way beyond my yrs. Only, unlike me, I hope you stick with it. Writing is a wonderful gift. Mercesgirl ![]() |
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